WEll, the first draft went pretty good. I was sooo stupid though. I forgot to finish a couple of sentences. -____-' Oh well, at least it was only a first draft. I also made a wrong interpretation. I said that the kids isolated Christmas because he was darker. I thought that sounded funny but I kept reading and reading that part and I convinced myself. I don't feel too stupid though because a couple of other kids made the same mistake. One problem I did have was showing that I didn't believe Christmas was black. I thought I made it clear that the town perceived him as such and once it was in their heads it was there. I guess this idea was only in my head because one of my group members and the teacher pointed out that he wasn't actually black. *I know he's not!* >.<
Working on the final draft right now. It's not as hard as working on the first draft. I pretty much have it down. I just need to make it a little more clean. Need to bring out my ideas about Joe Christmas' alienation and it's because of society's defined categories and blah blah blah.
I also need a better intro and conclusion. I think I came up with a pretty good title though. It has been changed from "El Titulo" to "Assumptions to Alienations"
Kind of eh but I think it's good enough. :)
Guess now it's back to the grind ;__; Waaaah!
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